narative writing.

Wednesday 15 June 2016.

In the year 2015, in a little town name Papakura, lived two enthusiastic people, a mum and a daughter . Their names were Emma and Kim. Kim was a very intelligent 13 year old and Ema was a helpful mum who loved to play and take Kim everywhere she wanted to go. Ema and Kim lived in a 2 bedroom house in a street named Royal Arch.

Emma and Kim decided to go to the pools for a girls day out. Ema said to Kim “ Kim you have to stay by me and swim so you don't drown and so I can watch you” “ okay” Kim replied”. Off they went. Kim let out a frustrating noise “YAHHH WHERE HERE!!”. They got out of the car and headed to the counter. The pools were called Massey Park. It looked very charming with lots of decorations on the building. “Hello” the lady said  “hello can I have 2 bands for the hydro slide please?” Ema responded “yup that is $5.50 cent” Ema gave the money and put their bands on and walked through. They got changed into their bright togs and gently walked to the pool.

Kim and Emma were having lots of fun. SPLASH, SPLASH,SPLASH!! the water went. There was a lot of people in the pool splashing and enjoying themselves. Emma and Kim got out of the pool and had a little snack.They had a tasty chicken sandwich and a chocolate fudge. They had a 30 minute break and went back in. An hour later, more and more people came. It was that crowded they couldn't even barely swim. Kim lost Emma so Kim decided to do the wrong thing and swim to the deep end. She saw a sign that read 3.0 meters warning: this section is deep be careful! but in she went.

“HELP HELP!!!!” Kim shouted to give a warning, no one  heard and louder she went and no one could still  hear her.  She said it one more time “HELP” Ema stood stunned in the shallow area away from Kim. She realised Kim was gone somewhere. She heard an echo shouting“HELP!!” “KIM! KIM! WHERE ARE YOU?” Kim couldn't answer because she was away from Ema and she was drowning. Emma dashed quickly out of the pool and ran to the office. “ HELP HELP MY DAUGHTER'S DROWNING I HEARD AN ECHO WHERE COULD THE DEEP AREA BE!!?” Emma worriedly asked. The life guards ran to the deep area and found Kim in the deep area struggling to swim.The lifeguard quickly dived in the deep area and grabbed Kim.  He quickly pushed her up and swam with her in his arms. They got her up on the vinyl area. They were getting in a position to get ready for cpr. A minute later before doing cpr,  her eyes opened. Mum scaredly said “ Kim I'm with you thank God!”. They gave Kim a sit up until the ambulance came just to check if she was alright. The ambulance came after 5 minutes and examined her .Everything was alright. They grabbed all their stuff and got changed.

Tiredly and worriedly Kim and Ema  headed home. It was 9.00 o'clock at night. Kim apologized to Emma and sadly said “Kim I told you to stay by me and you didn't listen. You disappointed me” “ I’m sorry I couldn't find you so I decided to swim on my own” “ Okay it’s alright just  ignore the past it has happened already”. They arrived home and went inside and went to bed.